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Title of my story:
Grandparents Day
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Where
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School and in church.
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When
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Friday the 10th of November.
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What
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Grandparents day.
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Why
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To celebrate what they have done for us and how good they are to us.
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Who
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Howl school ,my mum and nanny.
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Event 1
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Church-mass for grandparents.
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Event 2
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Show Grandparents around class.
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Event 3
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Shared morning tea.
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Event 4
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concert-Gym,lip sync group,pacifica group,kapa haka,Filipino group. I was in the gym and kapa haka group.
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Grandparents day
On Friday the 10th of November was grandparents day so we did church to bless them for all the nice things they have done for us. In church we did some singing,praying and receiving bread and wine and giving the new students rosary beads.
Straight away after that we showed our grandparents around our classroom and showed all the art we did and things like that. My nanny was saying nice comments about how great my art was because she is a very nice person. We also went into my sisters classrooms as well.
In the classes we had things to eat because everyone brought food so we could have a shared morning tea. My nanny said “that it was lucky she had three of us because we get to eat heaps of food”.
After that we did a concert we first had the gym people which I was in and we did roly polys and cartwheels and stuff like that but I and some others went in the little people group because they did not have enough people but it was fine with me and everyone loved it. After us was pasifika they were good too and then the lip sync group they were funny. After them was filipino they had cool dance moves and lucky last was kapa haka. I was in that too and we did a few things and they liked it.
