Monday, 23 July 2018

Term 2 Writing Goal

My goal is to use different sentence starters in my writing.

This is for the spectacular Shanelle

We are writing to you because we want to say thank you for checking on us to make sure we were not scared, worried or homesick. We are glad that you said goodnight to different rooms so they felt comforted.


You are obviously a kind person #mum because you help everyone if someone gets hurt you’ll help them. Also, another example is to help get things ready like meals or events. You help us to get along and help us to be better people.


No matter what you’re a funny, friendly and patient human being. We love that you’re not at all a bossy person. We think you’re the complete opposite of mean. All of us think you’re a very great person and when we mean great, no we mean super great. Thank you for coming to camp to help look after us.
We want to make a complement  how you are beautiful inside and out, and the most resilient person.

The real reason we wrote to you was to say thank you for being there for
us, coming on camp so we could have a great time with you and being loving in the heart.


From,

Rosa & #your favourite daughter Ella!

I am getting better but it is quite hard for me so I will try harder.



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